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I'll play with yours

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if you play with mine?
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3000x7000px 1.33 MB
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© 2015 - 2024 Ean-Sze
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Very nicely done. The skin textures are excellent, just the right amount of displacement / bump to be believable. Just enough reflectivity to have a believable sheen.

Pose is nice as well. Looks casual and natural. Not forced or artificial.

Hair strands appear a little too distinct and clear. Not so much so that it is distracting, but it does break a little bit of the illusion. And it is understandable, hair is incredibly hard to render. Particularly if you don't do any post work on it.

The right shoulder pad is a little odd looking. It seems like it is jutting out just a little too far. It is probably the camera angle, but the viewers eye is drawn across the chest, which makes one compare the left to the right. The angle of the left one makes it look a little short. A little downward angle on the right one might have minimized the difference.

I do like the textures and colors on the shoulder pads and panties. They are just the right color offset to her skin and the background.

The lower half of the image kind of lets you down a bit. The ground is a bit too flat and indistinct. The socks and shoes seem too flat and plastic as well. Which is more noticeable when you compare the fabric to the panties. But these are minor issues.